her first snow

to be fair, I haven’t been outside yet and my 
  the
windows weren’t open when I woke up, 
this was an hour after I “wanted” to wake, but if it has to get done
  first
it will get done and you’ll make sure of it

then I went to make breakfast
    snow
and had to share the kitchen with my roommate and her girlfriend
     here
who were already making eggs which is unusual for them 
I’m not used to sharing the stove or to 
seeing our neighbor’s yard match the color on the roof

       hasn't
the walls of my room are this
           made
light beige color and the frosted window on the patio door
                   me
is glowing

when I took a shower, I thought 'maybe
                     feel
my hair will freeze outside or something' but really 
                        anything
I don’t get the hullabaloo and 

I haven’t been outside today
                                          yet

the case for human error

4 responses to “her first snow”

  1. Pytho Black Avatar
    Pytho Black

    Very creative Tirado. I wish WP was a better platform and that there was an actual audience for original content. Or do you care about that?

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    1. Frances Tirado Avatar
      Frances Tirado

      Hm I’m not sure I know because I know very little about the platform. Is there a bigger audience for unoriginal content? lol

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      1. Pytho Black Avatar
        Pytho Black

        Let me know if you find one. Reddit is frustrating because I always got downvoted to zero. Substack is too money-oriented. Btw, your content is QUITE original imo.

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      2. Frances Tirado Avatar
        Frances Tirado

        Interesting. Yeah I think I’ll have to do more research and experimenting before I share my thoughts one way or the other, but it’s definitely an interesting space to be “publishing” original content on the web these days, and I’m not sure how my experimenting here (or anywhere else) will affect future endeavors in this space or otherwise!

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